Didn't embarrass myself the first time.
I intend to write more stories at some point in time, on this forum or on my blog. Don't worry though, I have no intentions of including you in them, so you can rest easy now.
Well, at least she's trying to improve.
The bit about licking feet has to go. The panty gag, too. :P Also, the cheesy pics. You have terrible taste in clothing, woman!
But those things are all subjective.
You need to inject more imagination in it, imo.
You don't have much experience with actual s/m, do you? Be honest. There's no shame in that.
by Another friendWe all know you're hot for Damaged, Tick. I saw in a post that Luna censored earlier that he already rejected cybersex with you a few times. Why don't you try harder?
I don't recall ever wanting cybersex with Damaged or anyone else here. I may flirt with people here and joke around, but it's never serious.
I can assure you that I am not hot for Damaged. I would have written that same story for any other member here if they were the one I was having a discussion about dominance with instead. It's just a story.
I must say your story was really good. The beginning even a lot of what I love to happen to me in real life. Until...
I pull hard on your leash and order you to follow me through the house, crawling like a dog on your knees.
Pretty much everything at this point and onwards is just way to submissive for me personally. It was well written and really creative, dont get me wrong. Just after the "torture" I would get too pissed off and just retaliate back, take control or just leave. I do not like pain.
You people are disgusting. REAL sociopaths NEVER experience a pathological juxtaposition of sex and violence! Perish the thought! REAL sociopaths want to make tender love to those to whom they wish to show affection.
I, Luna, would take you out to the finest restaurant. Then I would take you home, have long, stimulating discussions with you about our deepest feelings, and lay you down on a bed of roses, and consummate our love by stroking you tenderly, whispering the sweetest of gentle compliments in your perfect ears. For I am a REAL sociopath, and that is how we are, deep down inside. My Queen, my love. 
All hail Queen Luna! Long live the Queen!
You disgust me, damaged. Real sociopaths make love, not war. Sex and violence should be mutually exclusive. You are a sick, disturbed, depraved individual. I feel sorry for you, and the women who writhe under the lashes of your wicked tongue!
Fear not, gentle Luna. I am your special, Spatial observer. 
I will show these runts what a real man is made of! I will caress my Queen with gentle, soft touches, but reserve the harsh tip of my Sword, Verbose! for the rest of you fools, who do not know how to appreciate a wise and benevolent leader, like our good Queen.
Long live Queen Luna!