Piles and Edvard for the win. I will be working on the next excerpt when I get home in about an hour or so. It's been interesting to see the reaction to the story so far. I think people show their true colors at unexpected moments whether or not they mean to. No one else felt threatened it would seem, so I will continue to go in the direction I was heading in. Piles is a real life badass. She won't care if how I write her character is true to life, or perverse as fuck. Am I stirring the pot right now? Of course I am. I wouldn't be me if I didn't. :D
See you soon....