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What?? His wrists are firmly bound together and secured to the low ceiling of his cell! Can't you see that? Can't you? Look harder then ;)

Mmmm... Nice little bonus chapter :) Metty is deliciously corrupt! Will he redeem himself, while Ed spirals down into sinful darkness?

I like the first one. The second one shows no real bondage. Just a man flexing his abs, who happens to be wearing some chains. :p

I like to write a lot of grey into my characters. You will have a hard time (I hope) trying to figure who is the most dangerous/dominant/predator and who is the true victim- if there are any in this scenario. I want them to have a lot of colors and complexities. People who make me doubt my instincts about who they are at their core excite me. :) 

not too much, just strange as i remember a similar story being written by WFE about rass. anyway, no offence but i'm bored of this stuff now, you should write another character in to take my place.

Bonus Chapter

I feel like I'm possessed sometimes

The words he wrote on the mirror. Then he leaned in to look at his eyes- half expecting to see the slanted pupils of a cat, shrinking against the light.
His shirt was torn up from the struggle, and there were scratches on his face from where she dug her nails in- trying in desperation to get him off her. He thought about how she had tightened her thighs so hard to keep him from penetrating her, but the knife was already buried between her legs- and the blood that leaked out of her, was like a lubricant. She hadn't the strength to keep the knife from sliding further- closer to the entrance.

Reliving flashes of the moment in his head- he became erect. Nothing got him this hard. Not the pissing from a morning erection- not masturbating under his jacket in the city bus. Nothing got him this close to this kind of high. He ran his hands under the tap just enough to get the dried blood on his palms- wet again. Then, looking deep into his own eyes- he began to beat off hard and fast. He needed to get fixed before the scent of her wore off. Flashes of her blue lips came and her swollen eyes- quickened the pulse. The room disappeared and everything went white- then orange- then red. He stopped just long enough to unwrap the handkerchief he had on the bathroom counter. Her eyes rolled a little towards the edge, but they were still- perfectly fixed on him.

"I want you to watch me cum, baby." Was all he said before he finished in agony.

are you seriously reacting like this to me not wanting to be a part of your story? direct this energy into the next chapter or something..

Oh good. I'm glad you were able to pull yourself out of this fast enough to still seem like a badass who is fazed by nothing. Wouldn't want to fuck that image up for yourself.  :D <3

my bad, i remember you repeatedly saying your father was a sadistic child raping psychopath and i guess i put 2 and 2 together. whether it was you or a sibling he raped i found it weird that you would put a similar dynamic in this story. i never said it was an issue raven, you're getting really defensive. if i were trying to argue with you i would have asked what problems these were, knowing full well you would have little of substance to say.

Fine. I'll take you out. And for the record: I was not raped by my father. People write fucked up fiction all the time. It doesn't mean they are trying to victimize or control anyone by them. I think your issue with this is more about your own problems,  and you want to make me out to be some predator trying to feed on you. I meant you no harm. I'll put someone else in the story.

Piles? Will you feel victimized if I put you in my story?

I find it funny that you make a huge issue out of me having you in my story, make it seem as though I'm preying on you, then act as though I'm the one with the problem.  You made your point, I agreed to take you out, there should be nothing more to say.