Oh wow look, Fifty Shades of boring. That's some real baaad writing right there, doll. Phew wee! ;)
by bumpawww… is that what he said? :3 Tsk, tsk, Eddie... Something must have changed his mind. My inbox says he yielded… and was very, very compliant to my demands :3 A very, very good boy… ;)
She's a fucking liar. I ignored her email, as usual. This (and her gay porn thing) is her idea of geting back at me.
Edit: didn't mean to reply to sugar...
by RayvenSo Red and I had a little talk in chat today. Actually, let me start over.... I told Met I would compete with Red, and write a little erotica with him and sugar in it, and not too long after the convo started, guess who showed up? :)
She says she is a better writer than me, and I agree that she is way better at fiction than myself. I tend to do better with real life. But how does one get better at a trade, if not by to challenge one's self by competing with someone better?So here is the beginning of my contribution. Let's see if I can at least tie with such a huge talent as our beloved, Wet.
Of course you coudn't stay out of it and HAD to get competitive. With the creeper, of all people...
Anyway, since you did, I proclaim you the winner. I liked your thing, it was sexy without being too obscene. Also, I didn't get assraped so that's also a plus.
(And I don't mind Sugar :D)
Something I wrote for Rass a while ago...when rumours of Edvard's death had him very, very worried :3
You had The Nightmare again, so you open the door to Edvard’s bedroom timidly and ask him to let you sleep with him for the night please.
He doesn’t mind you waking him up, but smiles indulgently and makes room for you in his bed
“What was your nightmare about? Maybe talking about it will help†he says as you crawl into his bed. “Uhm… Stuff. Can’t remember very well†you reply
He frowns and makes that cute face he always makes when he tries to understand you for a few seconds before giving up with a sigh. He takes you into his arms and spoons you to make you feel safe
Ed’s wearing only a pair of black boxers and his entire body emanates heat
You can’t fall asleep… you don’t even want to this time. You just stay still, relishing the rise and fall of Ed’s chest against your back, his soft breath against your hair. You can tell the bastard’s already asleep… He always falls asleep so fast!
There’s never been any outward display of sexual attraction between you and Ed… He’s been more of a father figure to you, and he’s made his sexual preferences and orientation quite clear. Little does he know how much you want him to become your lover
You’re afraid of losing him, and the recurring nightmare of his death disturbs you to no end. You cuddle even closer against him, and you hold your breath when you feel an obvious bulge against your ass
You wonder what he must be dreaming about now… You press harder against his bulge, and feel your own dick getting interested. You start to rub gently against him, and he moans and presses back against you a little without waking up
You close your eyes and imagine him pushing against you willingly, and the arousal becomes so intense you just have to slip one hand under the covers and then into your own boxers, looking for release
You feel his erection growing bigger and harder as you continue to rub against it and pleasure yourself. The body behind you shifts, and a soft moan tickles your ear again… “Rass…†Suddenly, his breathing indicates he’s not asleep anymore, so you become perfectly still and pretend to be asleep
You’re tense and alert, your heart hammering against your ribcage, but Ed just retreats to the other side of the bed and turns his back to you… and soon enough a discrete rhythmic motion indicates he intends to get rid of his erection
The reality of the two of you in the same bed, hard and wanking, sweeps away all rational thought. You turn around and briskly pull the covers off your bedmate
You catch a glimpse of his leaking cock in his hand before he covers himself, exclaiming “Fuck, Rass, what the hell are you doing!
â€You straddle him and attack his lips with passionate kisses, but he pushes you away. “This is wrong, Rass, get off. You’re like a son to meâ€. “A 28 year old, the father of a 21year old?†you point out. You grind your hips against him, and your hand reaches for his hard member
He grabs your hand and stops you. His breath is heavy from arousal when he whispers “Listen, Rass, you’re a troubled kid… I can’t take advantage of you like this. I love you.†You’re very horny, so you struggle out of his grip and lose your boxers quickly. Ed’s eyes flicker down your body, lingering on your own hard cock a bit before he quickly averts his gaze
“I know you want this… Don’t hold back. Please. You’re a father, a teacher, a friend… I want you to be my lover as well.â€
“Rass, we really shouldn’t…†he tells you while you kiss and caress his body
His resolve weakens before your eyes, and soon enough, he stops trying to push you away, puts his arms around you and pulls you closer to his body
You moan and grind his hips against him, and his breathing becomes even more erratic. You know he’s an impulsive man of the senses, you’ve been counting on it… so when he starts kissing you back you smile a triumphant smile into your kisses
You move down on him, kissing his elegant, strong body while his hands play with your hair… You take his cock in your hand and flicker your tongue over the tip. You hear a defeated moan, and a shiver of pleasure runs through Edvard’s body…
When you close your mouth around his aching cock he pushes you down on it needily. You try to take him whole without choking, and move your lips up and down on him, tracing the engorged veins with your tongue like you’ve seen in porn movies
He gasps and makes delicious noises as he dishevels and tugs at your hair. His hips rise to meet your hungry mouth, and when you turn your attention to his testicles, he suddenly grabs your hair hard and forces you up again and on your belly
You can see there’s little restraint left in him, and he’s extremely turned on. He mounts you, his strong hands touching and groping your body, his mouth sucking and biting your skin, his wet erection buried between your asscheeks
You’re dizzy with lust, and feel butterflies in your stomach when he squeezes your asscheecks around his cock and presses his hips hard against you
You wonder if he’s going to penetrate you… “I want you inside of me,†you encourage him. It’s as if that was all he needed to hear, because he suddenly spreads your buttocks and thrusts his member into your opening
You scream at the searing pain and the unfamiliar sensation of being filled so completely, and he pauses
“What are you doing to me, Rass…†He growls in your ear… “I’m supposed to be protecting you, taking care of you… Look at me now.†Suddenly he pulls out and gets off of you, out of the bed, and into the bathroom
“I’m fine! I wanted this. Come back here Ed!†you shout. You were so close to cumming, and he just had to turn into Mister Concerned Parent all of the sudden. Typical. You sigh in frustration, and make yourself cum while imagining Ed doing the same in the bathroom.
When he enters the room again he points to the door with a stern face. “I think you’re old enough to handle your silly nightmares on your own. You should get some sleep for what’s left of the night.â€
“But Ed, why do you have to be like this? We could be so much more! I’m ready for this, dum-dum…†you whine.
“Well, I’m not. Don’t make me say it again, Roger. Go to your room and sleep. Now.â€
You get up, grab your boxers and go to your room. You curl up in the cold sheets and tears of frustration fill your eyes. One day, he’ll give in and be yours… But waiting for that day is driving you insane!