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 No, that's fine. Plenty of people don't...but that is late to be at work. So, that should be in the story. It's a detail that lends an air of credibility. Do you just want tips on lying or something? That's fine too, but you have to figure that out on your own or it won't be believable. Life skills.

When the stars threw down their spears,
And watered heaven with their tears,
Did he smile his work to see?
Did he who made the Lamb make thee?

 I have classes to 15:00 my work starts at 17:00 and ends 22:30 i live about 30min from the job so it works fine with me.

by wilful

 

by MaskOfSanity

 yeah, why is a diving instructor (was it?) at work at 22:00? i would have complained about that in my story.

 he knows...not what you are thinking though..2200 is use of military time (24 hour clock)..not many civilians use it

 Europeans use it. Not just for trains, spoken.

by MaskOfSanity

 

by wilful

 

by MaskOfSanity

 yeah, why is a diving instructor (was it?) at work at 22:00? i would have complained about that in my story.

 he knows...not what you are thinking though..2200 is use of military time (24 hour clock)..not many civilians use it

 Europeans use it. Not just for trains, spoken.

 Impromper use of detail, was my point. I'm tired. Also, I decided to see how the story could be told in a better way...so it worked. I dunno.

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 You asked me to explain i did. am i guilty because i did?

by mr_unknown

 You asked me to explain i did. am i guilty because i did?

 you answered the ones you wanted to..look back and answer the ones you did not

 By your logic that makes me more guilty.

by mr_unknown

 Im always evasive.

 no you are not