I like how u made me poop
9/10
I think coach jim making the boys change into the leotards and skirts was the funniest part. Also the 3 bathrooms.
May want to edit the math class scene. I dont think a single beer bottle could get anyone drunk. Maybe change it to a flask of gin.
Sc is pretty boring.
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9/10
I think coach jim making the boys change into the leotards and skirts was the funniest part. Also the 3 bathrooms.
May want to edit the math class scene. I dont think a single beer bottle could get anyone drunk. Maybe change it to a flask of gin.
It could be a very large bottle tho, maybe the setting is in Texas where everything is bigger. At any rate I appreciate the feedback. Delora helped write that part actually.
Sorry me and Bo don't know how beer works 🤣
My grandiose delusions are better than yours.
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