The poetry doesn't suck, what do you know about the artistic soul?
Your poetry is MID and clunky. Listen to yourself: “out of pity a wish to alleviate the vacuum”.
ALLEEVEEATE THE VACUUM. ALLEVEEAATE THE VACUUM. Get a five-star vocab, quickly.
Is a vacuum alleviated? Just say “to fill” the vacuum, lol.
Fittinger is NOT a word.
Makes sense to me in context at least.
You must be bad with context.
You're all native speakers aren't you?
I always find it curious how many English native speakers brag and compete over knowing the grammar of their own mother language.
If you don't know the grammar of your own native language you're illiterate and should go back to school. I never make grammatical mistakes in Finnish, and that's the norm in Finland. It's so weird to think there are so many Americans who don't understand their own grammar. It's even more bizarre to see people take pride in being able to write in their own native language. It's like taking pride in being able to not be retarded.
It's not an accomplishment people, you're literally barely passing the lowest bar in school.
I know who buyerware is. He's trolling you.
Google “caveat emptor” aka buyer beware. Also I’m not whom you think.
You're all native speakers aren't you?
I always find it curious how many English native speakers brag and compete over knowing the grammar of their own mother language.
If you don't know the grammar of your own native language you're illiterate and should go back to school. I never make grammatical mistakes in Finnish, and that's the norm in Finland. It's so weird to think there are so many Americans who don't understand their own grammar. It's even more bizarre to see people take pride in being able to write in their own native language. It's like taking pride in being able to not be retarded.
It's not an accomplishment people, you're literally barely passing the lowest bar in school.
The bar is actually quite high for the English language. First of all, Finland and maybe Sweden are ranked first in the world for education; U.S. is not. Secondly, English although “universal” is considered a very hard language to employ well. (Needs examining). I would argue that the German language with similar roots is just as hard. For a native English speaker the hardest languages are probably Russian and Japanese, but I’m straying from the point.
German for sure is difficult, so is Japanese.
I'm mostly laughing at people proudly correct each others' grammar in their own native language. It's kind of like piss-poor people feeling superior to their ghetto neighbor because they own 2,000 USD, which their neighbors don't, so they broadcast that to everyone thinking it makes them look rich.
Correcting someone's grammar to demonstrate superiority in education is like flashing a 10$ bill in front of a beggar to demonstrate wealth.
German for sure is difficult, so is Japanese.
I'm mostly laughing at people proudly correct each others' grammar in their own native language. It's kind of like piss-poor people feeling superior to their ghetto neighbor because they own 2,000 USD, which their neighbors don't, so they broadcast that to everyone thinking it makes them look rich.
Correcting someone's grammar to demonstrate superiority in education is like flashing a 10$ bill in front of a beggar to demonstrate wealth.
I saw it more like a compulsion personally, they can't help themselves.
