regarding your comment about Luna: it is wandering “aimlessly” NOT aimless. Adverb.
I can’t imagine what it is like to have English so bad as yours. My parents used to drill it into me all the time about the adverb until such time it became second nature. Your poetry stinks also. It is as if you are learning to ride a bike and just now discovered your training wheels. My best advice to you for better writing is to write exactly as you would speak. Dont fucking clunk it up.
Even if we didn’t read much in the later years you can tell who among us read a lot as a child.
Drive safeLY Yours truly in Grammar Nazism