good job
SS, rhyming adds to the fluency of a poem.
Sometimes I stop and think
Why do people drink?
They go and waste their liver
Taking an arrow from their quiver
They do it to have fun
But they end up like a bum
They get their high then fall
It was worthless after all
They'll be gone in just a blink
The moral kids- Don't drink
Dedicated to alcoholic scumbags that have no lives whatsoever