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That's rather breathtakingly beautiful.

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I take that as a good thing. :)

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A perfect harmony of words. <3

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Poetry is the lifeblood of the written word. It coagulates into an image of passion when spilled properly.

Cute play on words SS. Play with punctuation more often please, would make the expressions more vivid. :)

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I love the trees how they reach for the skies

Fingers nesting into fingers praying prayers to another God

How wonderful it could be if you still were here by me

I love the thorns that break my skin make me bleed make me feel I'm still here

I'm still here

I love the birds who are silent til spring

Wings almost touching wings faith in their ability

to be near yet so far like the way that we are

I cannot touch you now even if ythat you touch my soul without even being here

anymore

I have told you everything I know you told be of the things you did

I laughed at your mishaps and I cherish the memories

I carry now

The branches grow through my soul and I'm breathless once again can't believe

what is here when you're gone that you're gone did I even say goodbye?

I am trapped on this earth as I wish but I'll miss you and everyday

everyday I think you're back

Just to see how myself I turned into this tree reaching for the skies reaching for you

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gay

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I like your poem, Sensi. 

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Don't worry Sensy, we're still here :D

Joke aside, it's a pretty poem and I sense you were troubled by some genuine feelings when you wrote it. Who is it for? Friend who passed away?

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'The last stand' they called it,

Their faith determined long ago.

The crooked smiles smoothly flowing

From faces that knew it was time to go.

Others would claim it a glorious sacrifice,

But they knew better, a mere survival device.

Their crowning achievement, their coronation,

A dozen brave brothers, drunk and in need of urination.

 

And poetry is not necessarily 'gay'. There is also a lot of sadness to regurgitating words in a plethora of ways.

As to knowing my gifts and talents, I'd rather be renown for my curses and stupidity.

Makes a whole entertaining world of a difference.

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You should write more, I know you did some "for fun" and it probably came easily and naturally to you, so I doubt you know how good you are.

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