Perhaps this is a discussion after part 5 is posted (^^").
And when i said perhaps, i meant that it most definitely is.
Raven should use sugargirl in the story. Because fuck sugargirl.
by LycanI think that a good story should evoke feelings and reactions in people. It should give one pause to consider things, to ponder...to salivate, perhaps to identify. It should explore and dissect the characters, in a frank, but meaningful way and address the subject in such a way that it is neither glorified, nor vilified, but simply shows different perspectives.
In a place such as SW, such a story is right at home, exploring the darker, bestial side of humans. Every human has the potential and capacity for darkness, whether they choose to embrace it, to shun it and pretend its not there, it exists, and always will. For some it isn't darkness at all, it is their own shining light , part of their being. Even referring to it as "darkness" is subjective , especially here.
To combine society's "sacred" taboos , to offer glimpses inside the heads of those who's tastes in things religious, sexual or deviant, is bound to provoke thought, and call into play, individuals reactions to the literary images it produces, as well as their own moral and ethical positions.
To resist just handing over the candy , to maintain a consistent dark crescendo of tension , is an art.
I think this story is succeeding in doing all this , and more.
Good lord. If you think that drivel is doing any of the above then you need to get out more. And read more. A lot more.
if i'm easy to replace, why are you acting hysterical over me not wanting to be in it? you said yourself, it's only fiction and the character was not really based on me. also, why would you put yourself out there on this site of all places, and then freak out over people making suggestions or requests?
lol. Thanks Kurt.
This thread is one of those Homage To The Sock Puppet thingies. Everybody is writing their bodice rippers, with Edvard in the role of Fabio, for the sake of teasing/ edifying his crazy stalker chick. Kinda like all those "Show Me Your Knoife" threads erected in TK's honour. lololol
Tbh, I'm godawful at writing housewife porn. I write SF. So if I put my touch on this thread (and that won't happen for at least a week or 2) it will have mutants and guns and charred and smouldering ruins where civilization used to be. I think post apocalyptic torture porn works better with Meta's online persona anyway, no?