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Joint effort - poem writing

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 1842

This is how the poem will be structured

A

B

A

B

C

D

C

D

A

C

A

C

 

One added line per post. Simultaneous posts breaking the pattern are just let be and continue the pattern where we were.

Near rhymes are OK for bastards that want you to find rhymes for orange and purple and shit like that.

A lines rhymes with A lines, B lines with B lines and so on. Got it? Also... I'm sad to tell you, SC members shant be mentioned in the poem.

 

I will start the first line of the poem, it goes like this:

A night like this won't be forgotten

 

The next line should not rhyme with this, but the third line should.

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 1842
Joint effort - poem writing

Annoying stains on my shirt of the finest cotton

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 2485
Joint effort - poem writing

 

by AerynFrellMe

Her broken face will soon be rotten

 

Edit: Blah. You were too quick :P

Decide which line to keep and I'll rewrite to accommodate, I guess.

 It supposed to rhyme like this...

A

B

A

B

So, you're supposed to type something that rhymes with MrDelta's post (which is what I did. You made your post while I was posting mine).

Personally, I think it would a lot less confusing for people (especially those posting their part of the poem at the same time) if it went

A

A

B

B

instead.

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 2485
Joint effort - poem writing

From the blood of the innocent, all of them men

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 689
Joint effort - poem writing

Her broken face will soon be rotten

 

Edit: Blah. You were too quick :P

Decide which line to keep and I'll rewrite to accommodate, I guess.

 

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 1351
Joint effort - poem writing

Bodies slain around me, I killed at least ten.

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 1228
Joint effort - poem writing

This post is too confusing, 

I won't play.

Maybe in the future,

or another day. :)

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 689
Joint effort - poem writing

Um, yeah.

A night like this won't be forgotten

Bodies slain around me, I killed at least ten

Her broken face will soon be rotten

 

(Sens and I were also typing at the same time.)

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 1842
Joint effort - poem writing

I delete my line for now... so here goes:

 

A night like this won't be forgotten

Bodies slain around me, I killed at least ten

Her broken face will soon be rotten

From the blood of the innocent, all of them men

 

Careless bodyguards, a dead ex wife, a will and testament, a brand new life

I swear I'm not evil but I need some fun

 

(Next line rhymes with life, next after that with fun)

on 9/20/2014
Posts: 10218
Joint effort - poem writing

I can't help it, this world's just strife.

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