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I can say you had me ready

To jump into feeling

Or the you had me in a revolving door

Of I am here for you now

But then we'd both know I'd be lying

There are no blurred lines

I've always loved to walk barefoot

Because under me it is there

You are the ground

I laid my cheek on your cracks and learned patients

All while brushing my watercolor intentions on the

Fragile glass

That was us

I stood there with a rose in my hair

So that you could not smell it all rotting

I know that there is nothing pretty about

About broken

Yet we enjoy that waiting in the clinic room silence

I was 3 when I remember being called wrong: deep soul wrong

4 when I was bitch slapped and tossed back

7 when I realized an essential part of me has been amputated

9 when I saw my spine bind on crooked lines

In a world that that wasn't ready for people like me

And still a queen is all you see

No matter how many times they shuffle me back

I could see you bleed all the crippled reasons why

My soul wasn't deeply wrong

If I could I'd mold you so You could see what was specifically made

For the blind.

~Pray

*you guys can give me title ideas

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Reconstruct this, please. No punctuation or breaks murdered the whole thing.

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Oh shit I had it with breaks idk what happened. I'll do s. Later sorry 

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Benny Watson's Amnesia Tournament.

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You can check it now.

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Broken Beauty

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Ooooo I like that title... I like the phrase. 

Hmmmm I definitely use it in a poem. Thanks 

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Very nice. :)

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Thanks!

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