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Stuck with the soulless
Trapped on earth
With no goal
Half eaten egg roll
Shot of whiskey
Shot myself but missed
Why do I insist
of this? Persist.

Comes the moon
comes the sun
comes the thunder
Water rises
world crisis
Fun.

Your spirit gone forever
You don't care whatsoever
I'd kill your body if I could
Just an empty hood
It says that its alive
but it lies
How many times can you die
before you die?

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Great post. Did you write this yourself? It fits the theme of this forum well.

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Original work. Yup. I like the interpretation that differs so much from mine.

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snap snap snap snap

well done

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Sorry, just couldn't resist.

 

'Searching for a soul

Free of the confinement

With utter focus

Finished with all the rotten food

No more habits to hold me down

Found a spot where it hurts me

Free of any care

For what? A release.

 

The moon gives me a shadow

The sun obscures my vision

Lightning enlivens me

Water escapes my body

The world anew

Torment.

 

The souls reborn over and over

The ethereal ones reinventing themselves

If they could only hold to the flesh

Not merely see it as a plaything

Giving evidence to the death's power

True in every form

Why are we reborn every time

We think we killed what makes us alive?'

 

P.S.

I'm quite proud of your poem and enjoyed it thoroughly.

 

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What emo metal band is it from? LOL

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Your persona here is a bit misleading really, isn't it?

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I like you gypsy.

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If you are going to kill yourself, can I watch?

 

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