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Since I've been drinking and do feel semi-frugal with my word/phrase disposition. here it comes:

You have found me in a puddle of oil slicked rain.

Yet I can just provide you with a remembrance of pain.

Still you hold me tight and tell me to be still,

Till I provide you with my death's last chill.

Why do you bother with me, with your games of rest,

While I suckle to milk raining from your chest?

Do you not feel the bite on your nipple,

As I brave the pond with my ripple?

Perhaps you require me as would the others,

The desired one, the devourer, just as your mothers?

Am I to rest and vigil so calmly,

While you digest my spirit so solemnly?

Will you give me some respite for tonight,

Or am I to fulfill my faith, just oh so right?

My teeth are clenching around your blossom,

And now you tell me I am so fearsome.

All I desired was your sole acceptance,

but now all I've got is your perseverance.

I question now, what is my desired role?

I acquiesce to being a painful to wear sole.

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Vov,

I just realized something. You mention breasts in nearly every piece of writing you post. Do you have more than a standard fixation on this part of the female anatomy?

 

-A

 

Edit: I like this btw

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I find breasts utterly awesome and deliriously fulfilling.

Mind you, I do not wish to have female breasts of my own, but find it absolutely satisfying to fondle female breasts upon any occasion.

Agreeably, I mention feminine breasts on every occasion I get the chance, yet to my own perception it is not either disagreeable to my own apprehension of femininity, or is it despicable to my own incorrigible behavior.

I just like breasts a lot.

Should I write something about the nether parts of the feminine physique as well?

I admire the life giving parts just as much as I admire the prepubescent life sustaining ones.

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You sure you meant paddle instead of puddle?

 

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crys would never come here. but nice try lol

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Thank you for the correction. Puddle it was. So lovely to have an agreeable editor. Gonna fix the paddle mistake right away. My poetry tends to interfere with my drinking.

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by Pink01

crys would never come here. 

 But Rich would. 

 

(I'm her brother FYI)

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Just as a tease:

Se där ser jag min fader. Se där ser jag min moder och mina systrar och
mina bröder. Se där ser jag i linje med mitt folk, tillbaka till början.
Se, de gör uppmaning till mig, så bjud mig ta min plats bland dem, i
det hallarna i valhalla, där de modiga får leva för evigt

Obviously I apologize for all the misconceptions and the overt mistakes.

My desire to wrestle what is unknown to my ignorant self overcomes me at times.

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Nice!! :)  Gotta love old Norse.

 

Fetch this:

Gwyr a aeth ododin chwerthin ognaw.
chwerw en trin a llain en emdullyaw.
byrr vlyned en hed yd ynt endaw.
mab botgat gwnaeth gwynnyeith gwreith
e law.
ket elwynt e lanneu e benydyaw.
a hen a yeueing a hydyr a llaw.
dadyl diheu angheu y eu treidaw.

 

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My apologies for my disputable knowledge of what it means to act as though as you're in the sagas of the Old One-Eye.

Myself I have been impaled (not the funny way) and had to 'suffer' the indignity of being presented as a child of stupidity, as I didn't feel much (yet I understood more of what I represented by my nature and not what my nature represented).

Still as a youngling I enjoyed the understanding of what it means to fight a fight till you can not fight anymore, and then keep fighting never the less.

Then I understood what it means to fight for those you love and care for.

And then I finally understood what it means to fight for yourself.

 

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