A terrible song I just wrote about misogyny and rape

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by Blanc

on 8/31/2019

Posts: 9413

too many men in our streets free of doin time with a record! doesn't that scare you?

you commit rape you're going to prison. For life!

is this absolutely terrible or does it have potential? let me know. honest feedback.

this is a rough draft.

also this piano is *severely* out of tune. and, so am i. good thing we have auto tune nowadays.

if this is decent I'll put down a more produced track but, if it's shit balls then, maybe back to the workshop

last edit on 8/31/2019 12:12:04 AM

by Blanc

on 8/31/2019

Posts: 9413

last edit on 8/31/2019 12:17:20 AM

by bleary

on 8/31/2019

Posts: 1354

Tried to listen on mobile but —could there be something technically wrong with the video?

by Spatial Mind

on 8/31/2019

Posts: 3137

Can barely hear what you're saying.

It's not interesting enough to listen to for 12 minutes straight so It sucks.

If you want to redeem it in any way turn it into a comedy.

You're welcome for my honest opinion. Until next time.

by Blanc

on 8/31/2019

Posts: 9413

Spatial Mind said:
Can barely hear what you're saying.
It's not interesting enough to listen to for 12 minutes straight so It sucks.
If you want to redeem it in any way turn it into a comedy.
You're welcome for my honest opinion. Until next time.

I'm gonna keep working on it

The point isn't like... to be interesting or, to hear what I'm saying.

It's a rough draft so the point of these is just to hear the general "area" that I'm aiming for as far as harmonies and what not. and if you think this is "workable"

but I wrote most of the lyrics in the description, I don't remember what I was saying half the time either.

last edit on 8/31/2019 12:30:09 AM