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rough draft dont come 4 me 

just felt like doin a lil sing trying out some lyrics i wrote a day ago

will prolly delete this l8er <3

last edit on 5/26/2022 6:47:49 PM
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sirens are bad for you stay away  they are poops  💩

 

 

last edit on 5/26/2022 7:05:25 PM
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BLANC, listened to about 2:30 of the song. Slow to start, but I didn’t know you could play piano. Love the rolling bass where the tempo picks up. If polished could have promise.

I miss piano so much 

I had a Roland FP-7 (about 85 lbs) and Casio ( about 25 lbs)

I sold them unfortunately and it’s been about ten years since I took lessons 

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Blanc said: 

 

will prolly delete this l8er <3

I really wish you wouldn't do that. 🙁

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sirens are bad for you stay away  they are poops  💩

Have you met one? 

Ę̵̚x̸͎̾i̴͚̽s̵̻͐t̷͐ͅe̷̯͠n̴̤̚t̵̻̅i̵͉̿a̴̮͊l̵͍̂ ̴̹̕D̵̤̀e̸͓͂t̵̢͂e̴͕̓c̸̗̄t̴̗̿ï̶̪v̷̲̍é̵͔
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This is pretty cool. I love the expression, and if that's all it's for then don't change anything. 

I'll admit that I only listened to like 5 mins of it before I got sidetracked.  Shorter, effort condensed songs are overall more listenable for others.

visceral normality
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Okay, glad to hear it has potential. 

 

It takes a lot of work to condense the songs down from 20 minutes (or sometimes, hours. Yes hours of material) 

 

Into 3 minutes, of high quality, well produced sound (that I am happy with). A lot of creative love and energy and goes into them. Etc. 

 

So, I like to get feedback on the rough drafts, no matter how shit they are, to see- does this have potential, should I waste my time and energy turning this into something- or is it, unlistenable- is there something off or bad about it you know that needs to change. 

 

Because, I am my own worst critic- and if it were me calling the shots- all of it would go in the trash lol because it's never good enough. 

 

I have like, no concept of, whats good or not- people will tell me their favorites etc, what sticks with people etc, that's where I start to go in direction wise. 

 

Now we can have fun with the production I suppose. I just wasn't sure, because this is kidn of a slower vibe- if people would be into it. 

 

But a lot of 2022 music, especially in the ethereal genre, is quite slow so, I think it would be alright to have something with a slow pace as long as like Med said, there is like, interesting qualities to it with the rolling base and such. 

 

I've always been told by other people all my life- to "pick up the pace" with the music. So I have it in the back of my head no one wants a slow song or is interested in it. But, glad to see from feedback I've gotten so far, everywhere I've asked, people seem to be okay with this one. 

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Blanc said: 

 

will prolly delete this l8er <3

I really wish you wouldn't do that. 🙁

 Okay, I won't delete this one just 4 U lol 

 

Yeah, my previous stuff i had posted, I have no idea what happened to it, I must of on a whim just CTRL alt deleted it all. I think I have it saved somewhere in the depths of my computer, or in a back up somewhere but. I'm not entirely sure. LOL 

 

but yeah I'm trying my best to publish pretty much everything i record now- yes, every minute of it. the channel serves as a place i can listen back and like, critique and also take material out of certain sections. 

 

it's basically, the channel is a, giant sketch pad of my music. but yeah uh, i publish everything out of paranoia my devices will somehow implode themselves one day and all the material will be gone. 

 

so the a lot of stuff you might think is 'deleted' i just put on 'private' because i don't like it anymore but i don't delete it. 

 

now, if that channel somehow implodes itself for some odd freak thing happens to it... then we have a problem. gotta do backups for my backups across multiple platforms, hard drives, 'clouds', etc. lol to ensure i dont LOSE my shit. lol this is something i have learned the hard way. lol 

last edit on 5/27/2022 1:58:53 AM
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Blanc said: 

rough draft dont come 4 me 

just felt like doin a lil sing trying out some lyrics i wrote a day ago

will prolly delete this l8er <3

these are the 'lyrics' i was drawing from: 

 

 Uh, here’s the thing.
I got so much to say and a lot on my mind I might as well tell you how it is
I really don’t know what to do if I’m not doing it for the come up
But after the glow up I had I ain’t tryna go back
To the places I was in before where I hated myself and people loved me more
80 pounds and homeless looking for the next fix
And heart broken over a fallen angel, just some girl I’d be trippin over
Hopping fences get in trouble go to prison just to get another minute with her mind I was addicted
She played me like a record until I was strung out
And that’s not love but a story about how
A girl can take hearts and devour them whole
A girl can make a man or she can take their soul
And all their gifts are like magic sea sirens in the distance
A goddess of perfection but in a dry desert it’s an illusion
I check my pockets lost my compass I sit down for a drink of water
And she drowned me in the sand with her two bare hands I returned but not the same man…
And everyday I ask myself Did I get bigger or did the world get smaller
I pinch myself is it an illusion life is so illustrious it’s like I’m dreaming
Every time I take a bite it’s like a Highway to heaven but I’m clean
She liked the way I had a way with words I wish I could show her the way I see the world
Teach her how I feel with my finger tips. This life is so virtitous life’s the teacher I’m the student.

 

i wrote this like, a couple days ago just kind of free styling. spilled ink stream of consciousness rambling whatever. i know al ot of people say they can't understand wtf i'm saying so. this is what im saying. lol 

last edit on 5/27/2022 2:02:01 AM
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thank you everyone for listening. it really warms my lil heart. 

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