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Blanc and Waltz anal fanfic #1


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Waltz gets inside Blanc’s apartment disguised as a mexican maid. He watches as Tryptamine makes out with her on the couch. She was only wearing panties by now and they were drenched wet. As the stud he is, he picks her by the hand and moves to their bedroom. Waltz follows, pretending to do more cleaning while keeping a close look.

By now, she is on all four like a doggo, her big thic freckled ass upwards facing Waltz. The smell was inebriating, so much it made his cock gush pre-cum all over her sleepy Shiba-Unu.

Tryp lays on the bed like a king, with his flaccid alcohol cock in her mouth as she chewed like bubble gum. She was distracted enough for Waltz to slippery move in, and pull her panties down.

His face became enlightened like he had opened Julius and Vincent briefcase in Pulp Fiction movie. His eyes gazed her rugged wrinkled browneye. It looked even better than what he dreamed with. The best part was the drip đź’§ of sweat rolling down due to the heat, it was summer time, and her hole was probably the warmest part of her body. Waltz used the tip of his tongue to slowly catch that shit juice to be followed by a massage right over. Her rim felt rough, and had an earthy and muddy taste attached to it. Fuck, it felt good, she definitely had some eggs and bacon for breakfast that morning.

Blanc knew it was Waltz all along, she just pretended to ignore him on purpose. Classic Blanc move. She turned her head to watch his face stuck between her cheeks. She squirmed and gave a naughty smile with the corner of her lips. Her eyebrows frowned as she murmured for him “ Have a treat..”

The silent room was interrupted by the loudest brap Waltz had ever heard a girl rip. He was almost thrown against the wall by the sheer force of Blanc’s rectum contraction. The smell raped his lungs in such a way that he couldn’t no longer resist, and blasted his milk all over her Shiba, who was now very awake watching everything with a boner. She would later find out it was a gay dog.

last edit on 2/7/2021 10:58:16 AM
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I forgot you went to film school? You mean you still remember Pulp Fiction 

last edit on 2/7/2021 1:14:56 PM
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The reader is dropped into the middle of the story with no prior context, which made me feel like I was Waltz, infiltrating the appartment. The story follows a rapid pace that provided the right amount of detail needed for immersion. Overall the plot is straightforward, honest and treats the reader with respect for his maturity because it doesn't deviate into patronising sidenotes. I was captivated by the title of the thread and got exactly what I wanted. 

Thank you, for this. A solid 8.5/10, do write more!

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Bump

 

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here

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well written 8.39485739204857219503928175839103958575576868697796969698543 out of 10

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This was horrible writing if you were going for good writing, I highly recommend you try again. I would like to see you really apply yourself. 

 

https://sociopathcommunity.com/Forum/Topic/16861/1/smiling-while-crying- 

 

 

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Blanc said: 

This was horrible writing if you were going for good writing, I highly recommend you try again. I would like to see you really apply yourself. 

 

https://sociopathcommunity.com/Forum/Topic/16861/1/smiling-while-crying- 

 

 

 I am just happy that you read and saw what could be us in an alternate reality 

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